This has the makings of a preschool picture book. Lovely in its own way. No deeper meaning, no hidden references, no humor, just plain old story telling with lotsa colours. If you spruce up the english, you might be able to use this as a preschooler's guide to english...i think.
now, in just one day, we have trekked across the whole of the everfree forest, stayed at some Romanian BigMac recolours house, and trekked all the way back. Quickly, we must burn the cure because somehow it stops ponies anticipating things!
Also, they left Pinkie and Rarity standing in the middle of ponyville for a whole day, and didn't think to move them or anything?